Vis Com Peer Editing of Johnna

on Johnnas diagrams i think that the use of circles of a main design element is appropriate and deliberate for her fun connotations. I really like her use of colors to tie her photos into her system and their sections. However her title may need so more reconsidering and it has some big potential as another design element in her diagram. The three overlapping circles need to be intergrated into the main structure more....this can be through lines or arrows or shapes or a key maybe. You also need to set a text box width so prob do a thinner width. You may also need to increase you text size of your main titles such as economical, culture, ect.....but i like the over all direction......!